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Pre-programmed nightmares;
Dillusions of earlier sunsets
And later moonrises.

Forgiveness in the form of bated breath,
A token well-wish to an enemy.
When did we get so easy going?

Winds ricochet off walls and slam doors,
Faces drop and skinny girls fly away
With branches and leaves and dreams.

A glimpse of a better looking girl
But the grass is always greener
And window shopping does more harm than good.

Following just five steps behind
An imitation of a stronger walk, shoulders back
And head looking forth.
We’ll be wherever we’re going soon.

Winds become seabreezes:
Collective sigh of relief.
The chase of an elusive plastic bag ceases
And the beauty was noted then forgotten.

Unaware of the masses, the elements,
They stride along to a different beat
And soon to different homes.
©2005-2009 ~soosiep
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I think everything I'm going to write from now on will have something skot related in it and I can't help that. I wish that things didn't have to be this way, Do you wannnnnnnnna get away, get in this car and we'll drive away.

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:iconrealscarsneverfade:
bloody awesome luv~ u neva stop coming up with brilliant work! <3
:iconsoosiep:
thanks dear!

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"Oh my patient prisoner you have waited for this day
and finally you are free! You are free! You are freezing."
:iconfallen-princess:
love this - really beautiful work. again, the scenes you create in the reader's mind with your words are extraordinary and powerful :D keep it up

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...and if i'm not back in 5 minutes...wait longer!

"We shall bring the beauty of erotic poetry to the masses" :D
:iconcezukuu:
My only gripe with this poem s that its high point was hit so early on.

"A token well-wish to an enemy."

Great line.

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1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 7, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2....
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I like this one a lot. "Winds ricochet off walls and slam doors", that's cool.

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Sold Under Sin

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